English
Writing Composition
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5–7 yrs
Responding to Writing Feedback
回应写作反馈
Description
With teacher guidance, re-read own writing aloud to check it sounds right; listen and respond to questions and suggestions from teacher or peers to add detail, clarify meaning, and strengthen writing — this is the scaffolded beginning of writing self-evaluation, not an independent skill
Mastery Evidence
- Reread own writing and spot a missing word or unclear sentence
- Add a detail in response to a question (e.g. 'Can you tell me more about...?')
- Make at least one improvement to a piece based on feedback
Assessment Prompt
When your child's teacher asks them to read their own writing aloud and then asks "does that bit make sense?", can your child listen to the feedback and make a simple change to improve it?
Prerequisites 5
Checking Your Own Work
重新阅读自己的写作以检查其是否合理,是普遍自我检查习惯在写作领域的具体体现
Feeling of not understanding
注意到自己的写作何时不合理,需要将普遍的理解监控习惯应用于自己的文本
Simple Stories with Beginning and Ending
需要有写作内容才能进行修改
Writing Process Vocabulary
当学生了解"修改"、"编辑"和"含义"等术语时,重新阅读并回应反馈的效果更佳
Reviewing Own Writing
重新阅读自己的写作以检查其是否合理并达到预期效果,是写作自我评估习惯的实际应用