English Grammar & Punctuation Procedural 10–11 yrs

Varying Sentence Structure

句式多样化

Description

Expand, combine, and reduce sentences for meaning, reader interest, and style, using techniques such as embedding clauses, using appositives, and varying sentence length

Mastery Evidence
  • Combine two simple sentences into one complex sentence using subordination
  • Expand a simple sentence by adding descriptive phrases and clauses
  • Reduce wordy sentences by removing redundant words while preserving meaning
Assessment Prompt

When your child revises their writing, can they take a very long sentence and split it up, or take three short choppy sentences and combine them into one — choosing the version that reads best for the audience?