English
Writing Composition
Procedural
7–11 yrs
Revising and editing (age 7+)
修改与编辑（7岁以上）
Description
Evaluate and edit writing by assessing effectiveness, proposing changes to grammar and vocabulary for consistency, and proof-reading for spelling, grammar and punctuation errors at Y3-4 level
Mastery Evidence
- Read own or a peer's writing aloud and suggest specific improvements to vocabulary or sentence structure
- Propose changes to grammar and word choice to improve clarity and consistency across a piece of writing
- Proof-read writing at Y3-4 level for spelling, punctuation, and grammatical errors and correct them independently
Assessment Prompt
When your child revisits a draft piece of writing, can they improve it — changing word choices to be more precise, fixing inconsistent tenses, and correcting spelling and punctuation errors?
